Love the blurb


I am thinking about changing the blurb of my book as I think it is too vague. Here is what it is. Please tell me what you think of the new one.

Old One

Would you stand your ground in the face of the anger from a soulmate? Would you break down if it meant your soul-mate would break down with you? Would you fight over a piece of toast? Robert knows better than to question fate. But he also knows that he will fight tooth and nail for every inch of happiness.

New one:

Love is a many splendid thing. That is what the fairy tales tell you. Romance books full of sappy endings or predictable Things. Robert knows those things and they are not love.
For Robert Love is pain, love is desire, love is everything that must be in order to make you complete. Why he stays with her is the same reason why love works. Let Robert teach you about love, even though the woman he loves breaks all the molds of the classic romance. Experience the new, the bold, the LOVE.

http://www.amazon.com/Love-Jin-Okubo/dp/1495962717

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5 thoughts on “Love the blurb

  1. The manner of writing of these two versions is entirely different. Both are so good that I can’t chose!
    But the first one may leave the reader to find and dig in for the answers for the questions you throw at the reader:)

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